AFRIALDI PRANATA
NK 1-10/18251
ROBERT AND RIO
In my family there are father, mother, two brothers, and one sister. My father name is Syahrial, he is an employment. My mother name is Erlina, she is a housewife. Next my brother’s name are Robert and Rio. Finally my sister name is Ines. In this essay I want to tell about difference between my brothers Robert and Rio.
The first is Robert. He is a student in senior high school; he is the bad boy in his school. He has many bad characteristic: He is a lazy man, he always wakes up late in the morning and he always come late go to school. Besides that, he also often absent for attended study in class, he never heard what that my parents says. He also like hanging out with his friends until mid night. Sometimes, he also did not come back to home.
The second one is Rio. He is a student in elementary school. He is younger than Robert, he is too difference than Robert. He has many good characteristic: He is smart and creative. When he want to school, he always wake up earlier in the morning, he never come late to school, he always coming on time. And he also helps my mother’s job at home.
Really, they have same characteristic. But, that makes their very difference is cause of friends. Robert has bad characteristic meanwhile Rio has good characteristic. However they are my beloved brothers, and I am sure Robert will changing his characteristics after he adult.
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BalasHapusmay i add, check the punctuation, too.
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BalasHapusThat is good essay dude!
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