Rabu, 25 Mei 2011

describing people

NAME: AFRIALDI PRANATA (18251) NK 1-10

MY FAMILY

I live in a family, the member is: father, mother, two brothers and a sister. My father is 45 years old, he is a employment and he is a hard worker. He is a good father for his children. He also is loyal with his wife or my mother. He always teach me, how to be a good child and how to be a good father.

My mother is a housewife and she has a part time job, she work as a seller at home. She has small store at home. My mother is patient, she never angry to her children. If I make mistake, she only give me a good advice and warn. After that, I should promise with her, “Do not make same mistake”.

How about my brother? I have two brothers, the names is: robert and rio. Robert is a student in senior high school. He is a bad boy, he never to listen advice from his parents, he always close ears. I hate about his characteristic.

My brother second one is rio. He is too different than robert. He is a student in elementary school. He has good characteristic, he is diligent, smart and creative.

The last, he is my sister. She is the youngest in my family. She is a student in elementary school. She also diligent and smart, she has same characteristic with rio. That most I like from her is: she able to read al-qur’an and she never to leave pray. So I have two brothers with different characteristic. The first one has good characteristic and second one has bad characteristic. The last is my sister, she has same characteristic with rio.

3 komentar:

  1. *the member is = the member are (1st paragraph)
    *He also is loyal with his wife = he is loyal with his wife (1st paragraph)
    *I have two brothers, the names is = I have two brothers, they are (3rd paragraph)
    *My brother second one is rio = my second brother is rio (4th paragraph)
    *The last, he is my sister = the last, she is my sister (last paragraph)
    *keep writing jhoon :D

    BalasHapus
  2. she or he mysister?? last paragraph

    BalasHapus
  3. That is good essay dude!
    keep writing!

    add some pictures!

    BalasHapus